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Postby SupitsJonF » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:20 pm

maypaxvobiscum wrote:in order to add some ''creativity'' to this...the words at the end of each post has to rhyme in a syllabic manner. for example: Lines 1 and 3 rhyme. Lines 2 and 4 rhyme and so forth. like a really long quatrain.






1st line: Greavesie was getting to the good bit when suddenly.....

Hm?
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Postby maypaxvobiscum » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:21 pm

ok ok i shall edit the 3rd line :D  cause i realised the 1st and 2nd lines rhymed itself so maybe i thought we could make a small change to the format :p

anyway, 3rd line:


decided to leave but unfortunately....
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Postby Madmax » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:22 pm

maypaxvobiscum wrote:
SupitsJonF wrote:
maypaxvobiscum wrote:(continuing from Madmax's post..........)

decided to hide in a mountain nearby where....

That doesnt rhyme!

1st line: Greavesie was getting to the good bit when suddenly.....
2nd line: he realized the thread has been hijacked so he..
3rd line: decided to hide in a mountain nearby where...

*the first 2 lines rhymes Jon. so the 3rd line will rhyme with the 4th, while the 5th rhymes with the 6th, etc*

i thought lines 1 and 3 have to rhyme or 2 and 4... lool this story is confusing..  :Oo:
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Postby SupitsJonF » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:23 pm

I see we are unable to make basic rhyming stories :D
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Postby maypaxvobiscum » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:25 pm

:D  ok we shall stick to the original plan

1st line: Greavesie was getting to the good bit when suddenly.....
2nd line: he realized the thread has been hijacked so he..
3rd line: decided to leave but unfortunately...
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Postby Madmax » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:26 pm

:D
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Postby dawson99 » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:26 pm

ive got my own one now for this thread:

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WORST. THREAD. EVER

Maybe woof went a little overboard, but this is a bad thread, possibly the worst thread in the history of newkit.

And it's even too juvenile for me!

If you guys are happy though that's the main thing... just maybe we need a new section for lower IQ threads  :devil:
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Postby maypaxvobiscum » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:29 pm

well it could have been a good thread if people dont keep coming in and posting something completely unrelated to the idea thus making us re-start it again and again aye? ???
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Postby SupitsJonF » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:30 pm

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Postby woof woof ! » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:31 pm

thegreedo wrote:Woof, simple mate, if it gets to you so much pi$$ ofF out the thread and let the boys have their fun, however childish YOU may feel it is. Though what makes you the authority on thread content maturity truly escapes me.

Thats true Greedo, and btw nowhere have I claimed to be "the authority on thread content maturity truly".

The threads still here not locked or deleted

I simply expressed my opinion on the thread and was told by it's architect  to keep my opinion to myself. Now, as you all know, opinions are like ar'seholes, we all have one, and I'm certainly not gonna have mine plugged by Judge of all people.

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Postby Madmax » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:35 pm


:D 

terminator series was ok.. looking forward to the new movie by the way...
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Postby babu » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:36 pm

請您好他媽的趕走。我們不需要它和習慣做的跡象。
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Postby dawson99 » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:38 pm

maypaxvobiscum wrote:well it could have been a good thread if people dont keep coming in and posting something completely unrelated to the idea thus making us re-start it again and again aye? ???

dude, sorry I'm completely with woof here. It's a thread that was done before, didnt really work except the 3 or 4 people got a great post count... now it's back and its... it's just not good.

Maybe it's not important if it's juvenile or not... it's just a poor thread. It's the West Brom of threads, its Southampton... it's just not good.

It's not even so poor its funny tho, it's just poor.


PS - stupidsjohn, my thread on new shows is awesome, its informative and entertaining... it has a reason and a purpose. this thread has no talent.
If you are gonna write a story, do a page each, 500 words each, get a synopsis, characters, plots.. things like that. not dildo shop repetitions from years ago

do think though that my song association thread should be locked as well, that has more than run it's course.
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Postby Madmax » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:38 pm

babu wrote:請您好他媽的&
#36245;走。我們不需
要它和習慣做的
跡象。

Is that like a secret code babu?  :D
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Postby woof woof ! » Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:42 pm

maypaxvobiscum wrote:well it could have been a good thread if people dont keep coming in and posting something completely unrelated to the idea thus making us re-start it again and again aye? ???

Don't get downhearted Maypax, you can follow on from one Judge prepared earlier

lando had sneaked onto the aircraft aswell, thru a small hole in the fusilage (lando was used to small holes, unless he wore an ironing on his back when with women or men for that matter). To disguise himself, lando prolapsed his anus, and began to cover himself in mounds of rectal flesh, that resembled a large but grotesque ripped slipper :D

just then....................


but whatever you do don't use the f word, he finds it offensive.
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